Friday, July 30, 2021
Holiday Recount
On the holidays we went to the beach.I got my gear out of the car and we were
ready we climbed on the rocks the waves where huge the dirt was slippery. We had to
climb this mountain. We made believe that the water was smashing on the rocks. We put
the net out and went fishing, a few hours later we got two fish. After that we pulled the net In and we catched two fish in the net. We went to go back to the caravan and tidied up there and went back home.
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I like how you used full stop's, capital letter's and tidy word's.
ReplyDeleteHi Jerome it is trinity It sounds like u had a lot of fun i like how u used full stops,Capital letters and tidy writing.but try and put some more detail in.
ReplyDeleteHi Jerome it is Trinity. It sounds like u had a lot of fun. I like how you used full stops, capital letters and tidy writing. Next time you could try and put some more detail in. Why did u write about that?
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Bailey and my school is Oturu School. I like your writing because it is cool and I like your full stops.
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